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寫CV/resume email係咪要好有技巧? 睇睇呢份email sample點~

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原帖由 HWH8 於 2010-1-20 23:57 發表


呢份我都係抄網上sample....
邊度有有明顯既文法錯誤?
咁你要眕多幾個sample先得



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原帖由 Erikson338 於 2010-1-21 09:33 PM 發表

咁就仲好笑
resume點解會有上款同下款?
咁個email點寫?

一開始就show個resume出黎? 還是得一句"please find the attached file"?

cover letter 我未有時間寫嘛~



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原帖由 HWH8 於 2010-1-21 01:28 發表
咁求職係咪一定要寫COVER LETTER先? 我份份工性質都唔同, 無可能逐個寫....
email表面寫個resume方便人哋睇, 再加一個WORD file方便人哋print, 咁有無問題?
我淨係想知有咩文法 ...
1. 搵工唔好咁懶,寫封cover letter會有幾難?
2. 你咁樣send法好有問題,email內文好容易移位,所以根本唔適合打CV,亦做唔到方便人睇,而且你email內容同attachemnt既野相同,你只係浪費人地時間將相同既野睇兩次






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原帖由 HWH8 於 2010-1-21 21:42 發表


咁個email點寫?

一開始就show個resume出黎? 還是得一句"please find the attached file"?

cover letter 我未有時間寫嘛~
無時間寫cover letter,但係又有時間搵工?



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原帖由 Erikson338 於 2010-1-21 09:48 PM 發表

1. 搵工唔好咁懶,寫封cover letter會有幾難?
2. 你咁樣send法好有問題,email內文好容易移位,所以根本唔適合打CV,亦做唔到方便人睇,而且你email內容同attachemnt既野相同,你只係浪費人地時間將相同既野睇兩 ...
我試過send去其他email, 內文完全無移位. 個word file係方便佢print姐, 睇唔睇隨得佢......


咁cover letter寫幾多字好呀?



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原帖由 HWH8 於 2010-1-21 22:05 發表


我試過send去其他email, 內文完全無移位. 個word file係方便佢print姐, 睇唔睇隨得佢......


咁cover letter寫幾多字好呀?
你係咪試晒所有email系統?
人地未睇又點知個attachment可以唔睇,你當人地係你肚入面條蟲

cover letter一般預一頁紙



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that's much better...

some of the experience i can share with you...
1. in general HK, cover letter or email keep it short & brief, max 1 page... no one will spend too much time reading a long essay kind of cover letter... if you know the reader is amercian that's another story...
2. in the cover letter write something to convince the company that you have the necessary background and interest to the position... that means "draw their attention"... leave the reader a message that you are a potential candidate...
3. better send your cv as an attachment... use "word" as it is popular file format...
4. cv has to be clear and detailed, but not clumsy... table format is fine, just make sure it looks good... again keep it within 2 pages...
5. search the internet...  do some homework reading interview guide, cv writing... go to agency website there they have teaching material regarding all these...

cover letter & cv is the very first image of you to the company so do spend some time preparing it...
hope you find a job soon!!!  good luck...

[ 本帖最後由 pokfulam 於 2010-1-22 02:42 AM 編輯 ]



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原帖由 HWH8 於 2010-1-21 22:05 發表
我試過send去其他email, 內文完全無移位. 個word file係方便佢print姐, 睇唔睇隨得佢......


咁cover letter寫幾多字好呀?
我曾經都好似你咁唸,
但sd比其他fd, 唔同email system結果可能會唔同架......
(未必個個都用common system)






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原帖由 HWH8 於 2010-1-21 21:42 發表
咁個email點寫?

一開始就show個resume出黎? 還是得一句"please find the attached file"?

cover letter 我未有時間寫嘛~
寫cover letter仲容易過做一個project,
唔洗spend你好多時間~~

上網搵sample,
寫自己野, 好小心proofread, 加埋都唔洗1 hour~~~~~~~~~



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PART-TIME都要寫咁多野嫁



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原帖由 HWH8 於 2010-1-20 09:43 PM 發表
呢份網上搵的:





我得part time 經驗, 寫CV係咪淨係寫學歷+工作經驗就OK?
用table form 好D定用list form 好D?
請指教一下~
我都負責過HR,你呢份resume,一定冇得in,如果你得F5程度,都仲可以接受,但真係.......好差下,你上網搵下啦,resume其實係一封sales letter,sell緊你自己呀,睇見封信係咁,就會聯想到你個人都係咁,比多啲誠意好冇,記住,人地見唔到你個人,封信就係你,你想比個嘜嘢印象人地吖。



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原帖由 HWH8 於 2010-1-20 21:43 發表
呢份網上搵的:





我得part time 經驗, 寫CV係咪淨係寫學歷+工作經驗就OK?
用table form 好D定用list form 好D?
請指教一下~
Just some minor grammatical mistakes -

To >>>><<<< LTD:


Dear Sir/Madam,

Thank you for reading my email.

I am a current graduate of >>>><<<> University in 200X. ("current" is not necessary.  You are using present tense already).

With reference to your advertisement in the >>>><<<<, I am writing to apply for the position of >>>><<<<.

Right here below is my resume, please take a look:  ("Right here" is chinglish.  Below is suffice.)"


Essentially, you have combined an application letter with your CV.  If you are applying for serious job, a hybrid application is not enough.  Bearing in mind the purpose of CV and application letter, apart from providing your information to a potential employer, is to impress your employer.   Your hybrid letter and CV is just any other application, not very impressive.  

May be you should search some templates on line.



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哈, 純個人感覺, 樓主都好有「主見」~~~~

乜而家原來興cover letter 直接 = email 架?.... 我向來都附 2 個files, 1 個cover letter, 1 個cv, 跟住email 寫好短, 講報咩工, 請睇附件 2個, 同埋contact method. 因為我覺得cover letter一樣formatting 最好唔好動, 所以從無諗過直接email度打...

乜直接email 度打會好d 咩? thanks!







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to be honest
cover letter almost=useless
at least to me-.-
i never sent any cover letter but i still get the job
the point is if u got a better qualifications,what's the cover letter for?
btw,even u dun got it
my frds work in hr saids-->we never watch cover letter,wasting time
if ur exp+qua=ok,they will call u directly
not unless the pos ur trying to attend is manager or sth,apparently
with ur question,ur not,so just keep an eye on the cv,and stop wasting time on cover letter

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however, some interviewers printed my cover letter


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