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[教師求職信]請幫忙看一下文法和其他錯漏,感謝

[教師求職信]請幫忙看一下文法和其他錯漏,感謝 E-mail 此主題給朋友

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Dear Principal,

I am applying the Chinese graduate master position posted on xxxxxxx.com. Secondary education is full of challenges now since it is facing a huge and unpredictable resulted change in the whole system, but I believe that my experiences and enthusiasm can help me to overcome all the problems I will meet.

I studied Chinese at XXXXU and I graduated in 200X. I can teach both junior and senior Mathematics and Chinese. I had been a part time Chinese teacher of XXXXXXX Education Centre when I was year 2 and 3. Now I am a full time Chinese teacher there and my duties are listed in the resume that sent with this letter.

I am an experienced Chinese teacher and I am well-prepared to teach. I have a well understanding of the new 334 system and I know how the Chinese courses will look like after the reformation.

I believe that schools and teachers play an important role in education since I am a beneficiary. I got only 5 points in my first HKCEE and I caught a chance of repeating F5. I met some excellent teachers and I got 25 finally. I recognized that education can really change the life of somebody. It is a massive job and I believe that it is my lifelong career.

I visited the web site of your school and I found that the school founding principles and my aspirations are perfectly matched. I hope I can have a chance to work with you and help more students to grow or renew their life like how my teachers had done to me.

I am looking forward to speaking with you about the future development of the school and how I can work for it.

Yours Sincerely,
XXXXX
01/01/09



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樓主等陣先
你教中文, 點解唔寫中文信, 以顯示實力
你對自己英文無信心就無謂自暴其短
商界/ 政府就話九成九必寫英文






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原帖由 凌操 於 2009-4-24 02:37 PM 發表
Dear Principal,

I am applying the Chinese graduate master position posted on xxxxxxx.com. Secondary education is full of challenges now since it is facing a huge and unpredictable resulted change i ...
99.9%GAME OVER。完全無相關訓練(PGDE),教中文有無普通話基準?教數學你夠唔夠本科生爭?今年,一堆古靈精怪o既phD都來中學見工,你有乜野比佢突出?去教育討論區見識多D,再打過另一封信。



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我唔得閒改晒,改下d其他人未改過既先啦..

1)I am applying FOR the Chinese graduate master position posted on xxxxxxx.com.

2) I have a well understanding -> I have a GOOD understanding
understaing 係 noun, well 係 adv, good 係 adj.

3) I am looking forward to speaking with you ... ->
I am looking forward to speaking TO you ...  (單向)or
I am looking forward to TALKING with you ..(雙向) 

其實...睇完你封信,個人覺得,你會做到GM既機會,真係近乎0..
不如改用中文啦



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多謝各位指教...我知我英文真係差
真係唔該哂各位



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太多"I"字,感覺自我中心,建議用一些被動式,多些變化。


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