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點算為知一個好既essay?
點先可以improve essay writing skill?
同埋其實寫既時候應該keep it simple 定係應該寫好多好多同埋用d好難既字:smile_41:

點算為知一個好既essay?

[color=blue]簡單d 講, 你寫完, 放低一日再睇, 而你就咁睇篇文又知自己寫緊乜就ok。(最好搵到外人睇會客觀d)[/color]
[color=blue]睇落好似好簡單, 實際你試頭幾次會發現自己真係唔知寫緊乜 (assume 你唔係自欺欺人, 自我陶醉)[/color]
[color=blue]好既essay 至少要自己改過三次或以上, [/color]
[color=blue]正常essay 應該要寫三次: 第一次寫寫knowledge: 諗到乜寫乜, 專注logic 同答問題, 乜都唔好理, grammer 錯又好, 無reference 又好, 最緊要答左條問題, 俾左答案先[/color]
[color=blue]第二次寫grammer: 確保你篇文表達到你想寫既野, 同埋改下d grammer mistakes[/color]
[color=blue]第三次總體寫一次: 問題答哂未? 重點解釋左未? 有無reference support 自己d point? 仲有無grammer 錯? 有無結論? 知唔知自己講乜? [/color]

點先可以improve essay writing skill?

[color=blue]老土d 講, 一定係睇多d 書, 對要寫既subject 了解清楚[/color]
[color=blue]具體d 講, 你寫之前已經要諗到個outliine, 要有logic thinking[/color]
[color=blue]要當睇你篇文個個乜都唔識, 而睇完你篇野佢就可以明白[/color]
[color=blue]你當寫essay 同計數一樣咁諗, 要有steps, 唔好就咁拋個結論就算, 例如:[/color]
[color=blue]唔食飯就會身體唔好, 同意or 唔同意[/color]
[color=blue]1) 點解唔食飯就會身體唔好? (呢個係definition 既stage, 每一條問題先破題, 話到人聽你知條問題問緊乜, d 專有名詞係點解)[/color]
[color=blue]2) 食飯身體係咪就一定好? (嘗試反駁問題句statement, 提出相反觀點, 你駁到既, 唔同意既力道就會加強, 駁唔到既, 你到結尾同意既時候就會更有說服力。最緊要亦都show 到俾人睇你有諗過兩面意見, 有深入了解)[/color]
[color=blue]3) 有無可能唔食飯都身體好? (跳出同意或唔同意, 嘗試諗其他既可能性。好多野除左同意同唔同意仲有好多選擇。)[/color]
[color=blue]4) 結論 (如果你前3part 做得好, 個結論好自然就會出到黎, 寫完頭3part, 你都會feel 到自己係傾向同意/唔同意/半同意, 只係再總結一下rasie 過既point 再加番句同意/唔同意既答案)[/color]
[color=blue]同計數一樣, 答案係唔重要 (多數俾得你寫essay 既題目都唔會有咩正確答案, 有就大家照抄得啦, 唔駛寫), 反而係你諗過既point, logic flow 先係最重要。[/color]

同埋其實寫既時候應該keep it simple 定係應該寫好多好多同埋用d好難既字:smile_41:

[color=blue]簡單一句, 唔熟唔食, 唔知唔用。唔識既野唔好亂用。essay 考既係logic 同knowledge, 唔係考修辭。[/color]

[[i] 本帖最後由 Chingyuan 於 2010-9-28 11:00 AM 編輯 [/i]]

the ONE thing that you MUST do to write a good essay is to LINK TO YOUR THESIS

it doesn't matter how much information you give, but as long as you do not relate your argument back to your thesis, the argument is useless and pointless.

as for simplicity, we have an acronym in English called KISS - Keep It Simple, Stupid! big words do not make you sound smart. it is always better to use simple words correctly, than to use big words the wrong way.

another thing that will help you improve your english is to watch cartoons or TV shows in english! I don't know why but the Hk government doesn't seem to focus on oral communication (ie speaking) in english. the emphasis is on grammar. to write well you need to speak well. to learn to speak well, you must listen a lot and get spoken to in english. notice how im not following a lot of the puncuation rules here (ie not capitalizing I etc.)? these things are miniscule in the grand scheme of things. no one care if you have perfect grammar, but they do care if you can speak.

上面2位多謝你地:smile_38:  分析得好仔細, 對我好有幫助
你地寫essay一定好勁 :smile_40:

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點算為知一個好既essay?

簡單d 講, 你寫完, 放低一日再睇, 而你就咁睇篇文又知自己寫緊乜就ok。(最好搵到外人睇會客觀d)
睇落好似好簡單, 實際你試頭幾次會發現自己真係唔知寫緊乜 (assume 你唔係自欺欺人, 自我 ... [/quote]
想問多樣野就係,
你講話要嘗試反駁個問題既statement
假設如果我同意, 但我提出另一個觀點去反駁, 去講其他野, 講下pros and cons
唔會推翻你之前所寫既野咩:smile_41:

我寫essay好多時一面倒講一面, 支持或者唔支持, 因為我驚講另一面既話會自打嘴巴
次次d文都好低分, 其實係咪就係衰呢樣:smile_41:

thx解答

我寫essay好多時一面倒講一面, 支持或者唔支持, 因為我驚講另一面既話會自打嘴巴
次次d文都好低分, 其實係咪就係衰呢樣

[color=blue]一面倒支持係死症.........你要明白老師叫你寫essay 唔係在乎你同唔同意, 係想知道你對呢個話題既熟悉, 如果你只識得講一面既野, 即係話你認識得未夠透徹。多數essay topic 都係好多人成日拗過, 正反兩面都有好多point, 唔會有咩確切結論, 所以就算你係正定反, 其實都無乜所謂, 但無論你企邊一面, 你都要知道哂兩面既理據。[/color]

假設如果我同意, 但我提出另一個觀點去反駁, 去講其他野, 講下pros and cons
唔會推翻你之前所寫既野咩?

[color=blue]當然唔會, 如果你係同意個方, 你可以舉出其他人反對既理由, 再一一反駁, 咁你同意既立場咪更加有力。講d 反對聲音, 唔係為講而講, 係為左反駁佢地, 然後加強自己既說服力。咁先show 到你不但熟悉topic, 更加有批判思考過。[/color]

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