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Astro_0 2019-3-11 07:05 PM

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Louise Copper was an sensational lecturer in my school day memory. He always give some extraordinary effective and exciting lecture to us by using surprising expression. We always been innovated unconsciously. Therefore, we love him so much.

Five years ago, he gave me the last lecture that he had diagnosed as last stage cancer. That day, we all class filled in the whole lecture room and his sick thin figure was standing in front of us. He asked us a question, " Can you tell me what things can do is no regret to life?" We all silent. We silenced not just because it is too difficult to answer but difficult to last this lesson.

After a while, he started doing set-up exercise in front of us and said, " If no one can answer me, I do set up until the lecture end." We all shocked about his act and feel embarrassing to him. I was frustrating and painful when looking his sweating face and listening his deep breathing.

Ten minutes later, a scene flashed in my mind and I was inspired. I broke the silent and answered Copper, " Put the hands up and laugh to the air that you are the winner! ". See Copper frowned and stop doing set-up exercise. He stood up and praised to me. " You're right. Well done!!" Every student stared to me and clapped and Copper clapped too. I couldn't believe I can answer him at that moment.

Three months later, Copper is pass away. Every student who've attended his lecture and I attended to his funeral. Each of us are unwilling to let him go. Until now, I don't forget his spiritual speech. The more unforgettable is the magical moment of every second of his last lecture especially the flashing in my mind. Someone say the flash representing spiritual inspiration. But I think that is Oracle…

.kaxka.. 2019-3-11 07:43 PM

👎👎👎👎 no good

AttaccaWu 2019-3-11 10:55 PM

A very touching story!  We shouldn't wait until the last lesson to show our gratitude.  Thanks for the sharing!

corwin 2019-3-11 11:45 PM

was this done with Google Translate?

krzys995x8 2019-3-12 02:38 AM

Too many grammatical errors (tense, preposition, choices of diction....)
It would be alright if this were just the first draft.
Who would be doing the 賞? Why would anyone be doing the 賞?

Witches 2019-3-12 07:46 AM

[quote]原帖由 [i]krzys995x8[/i] 於 2019-3-12 02:38 AM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=496106571&ptid=28087257][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
Too many grammatical errors (tense, preposition, choices of diction....)
It would be alright if this were just the first draft.
Who would be doing the 賞? Why would anyone be doing the 賞? [/quote]

雅俗共賞?共欣賞。

krzys995x8 2019-3-12 08:50 AM

[quote]原帖由 [i]Witches[/i] 於 2019-3-12 07:46 AM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=496109223&ptid=28087257][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]


雅俗共賞?共欣賞。 [/quote]

共欣賞Something that is full of mistakes and errors?

uhadmeathello 2019-3-13 07:41 AM

We always been innovated unconsciously??


set-up exercis??

uhadmeathello 2019-3-13 07:43 AM

extraordinary effective?



surprising expression?


其實中文想寫咩呀?  :smile_41:   :smile_41:

corwin 2019-3-13 08:37 AM

[quote]原帖由 [i]uhadmeathello[/i] 於 2019-3-13 07:41 AM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=496161080&ptid=28087257][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
We always been innovated unconsciously??
我們總是在不知不覺中進行創新

set-up exercis?? [/quote]
We always been innovated unconsciously -> 我們總是在不知不覺中進行創新 ?

set-up exercis -> sit up exercise ?

沈小C 2019-3-14 07:29 AM

[quote]原帖由 [i]corwin[/i] 於 2019-3-13 08:37 AM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=496162795&ptid=28087257][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

We always been innovated unconsciously -> 我們總是在不知不覺中進行創新 ?

set-up exercis -> sit up exercise ? [/quote]
你寫中文!?

corwin 2019-3-14 08:05 AM

[quote]原帖由 [i]沈小C[/i] 於 2019-3-14 07:29 AM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=496211952&ptid=28087257][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

你寫中文!? [/quote]with help from Mr. Pichai

Witches 2019-3-14 08:28 AM

[quote]原帖由 [i]krzys995x8[/i] 於 2019-3-12 08:50 AM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=496111364&ptid=28087257][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]


共欣賞Something that is full of mistakes and errors? [/quote]

共欣賞啫。是否欣賞是另一個問題。
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