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輪大碩士仔 2021-1-3 03:10 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]鍾角力使[/i] 於 2021-1-3 02:36 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529808561&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
如標題是 xxxx, 我向人已就該標題內容, 發表意見, 咁寫 ok ?
I expressed my opinion for the above captioned subject. [/quote]
直接寫你的idea就可以,唔洗講依家我發表意見咁all gor架

111x111=12321 2021-1-3 03:10 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]鍾角力使[/i] 於 2021-1-3 02:36 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529808561&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
如標題是 xxxx, 我向人已就該標題內容, 發表意見, 咁寫 ok ?
I expressed my opinion for the above captioned subject. [/quote]
In my opinion, I'd like to use "opinion on". :P

[url]https://www.thesaurus.com/e/grammar/opinion-of-vs-opinion-on-vs-opinion-about/[/url]

輪大碩士仔 2021-1-3 03:11 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]111x111=12321[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:10 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529809922&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

In my opinion, I'd like to use "opinion on". :P

https://www.thesaurus.com/e/grammar/opinion-of-vs-opinion-on-vs-opinion-about/ [/quote]
法國大餐

111x111=12321 2021-1-3 03:13 PM

//多餘
???

閣下一覆的確打多左兩粒字, 忘記了三粒icons. ;P;P;P

輪大碩士仔 2021-1-3 03:14 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]111x111=12321[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:13 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529810042&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
//多餘
???

閣下一覆的確打多左兩粒字, 忘記了三粒icons. ;P;P;P [/quote]
"In my  opinion" , dum 波鐘專用:smile_27::smile_27::smile_27:

[[i] 本帖最後由 輪大碩士仔 於 2021-1-3 03:15 PM 編輯 [/i]]

111x111=12321 2021-1-3 03:19 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]輪大碩士仔[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:10 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529809895&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

直接寫你的idea就可以,唔洗講依家我發表意見咁all gor架 [/quote]
錯, 你可能以為討論區回帖.
樓主case係email, 唔同. :smile_34::smile_34::smile_34:

[color=DarkRed]亦無話係收集意見[/color], 上司發表講話、宣報措施、通報資訊, 你'忽然'發表意見???
劈頭就寫? :smile_42: ......... 等畀人劈.[COLOR=WHITE]

[[i] 本帖最後由 111x111=12321 於 2021-1-3 03:22 PM 編輯 [/i]]

111x111=12321 2021-1-3 03:21 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]輪大碩士仔[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:14 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529810065&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

"In my  opinion" , dum 波鐘專用:smile_27::smile_27::smile_27: [/quote]
Mmm....[color=Silver].(dum.波.鐘.中..)[/color]... 疏落的email (幾日一次以上之類) 是需要的.

當日已有來回, 又唔同.

[[i] 本帖最後由 111x111=12321 於 2021-1-3 03:22 PM 編輯 [/i]]

輪大碩士仔 2021-1-3 03:22 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]111x111=12321[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:19 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529810234&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

錯, 你可能以為討論區回帖.
樓主case係email, 唔同. :smile_34::smile_34::smile_34:

亦無話係收集意見, 上司發表講話、宣報措施、通報資訊, 你'忽然'發表意見???
劈頭就寫? :smile_42: ......... 等畀人劈. [/quote]
你成日羽毛倫,你有冇被炒魷?;P;P;P

111x111=12321 2021-1-3 03:23 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]輪大碩士仔[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:22 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529810389&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

你成日羽毛倫,你有冇被炒魷?;P;P;P [/quote]
我劈唔少友. :smile_27:

輪大碩士仔 2021-1-3 03:24 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]111x111=12321[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:21 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529810311&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

Mmm.....(dum.波.鐘.中..)... 疏落的email (幾日一次以上之類) 是需要的.

當日已有來回, 又唔同. [/quote]
冇自信的表現,對方睇你唔起:smile_34::smile_34::smile_34:

111x111=12321 2021-1-3 03:25 PM

辦公室溝通禮儀, 好simple, don't be naive. :smile_o13:

111x111=12321 2021-1-3 03:26 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]輪大碩士仔[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:24 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529810429&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

冇自信的表現,對方睇你唔起:smile_34::smile_34::smile_34: [/quote]
係, 成日用":smile_34::smile_34::smile_34:",
甚至有依賴性, 是冇自信的表現.

輪大碩士仔 2021-1-3 03:26 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]111x111=12321[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:25 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529810485&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
辦公室溝通禮儀, 好simple, don't be naive. :smile_o13: [/quote]
有“imo" , 有幾禮儀? 清楚表達自己,別羽毛倫才是禮儀:smile_34::smile_34::smile_34::smile_34:

輪大碩士仔 2021-1-3 03:28 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]111x111=12321[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:25 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529810485&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
辦公室溝通禮儀, 好simple, don't be naive. :smile_o13: [/quote]
This is business letter jargon, which should be avoided;P;P;P

111x111=12321 2021-1-3 03:29 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]輪大碩士仔[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:26 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529810522&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

有“imo" , 有幾禮儀? 清楚表達自己,別羽毛倫才是禮儀:smile_34::smile_34::smile_34::smile_34: [/quote]
係有人寫imho, 係邊? :smile_14:
勿乳毛輪....大碩士仔!

Mmm...... 四粒, 你都相當缺乏自信呀.[color=white]

[[i] 本帖最後由 111x111=12321 於 2021-1-3 03:31 PM 編輯 [/i]]

111x111=12321 2021-1-3 03:32 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]輪大碩士仔[/i] 於 2021-1-3 03:28 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529810587&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

This is business letter jargon, which should be avoided;P;P;P [/quote]
你又出jargon icon啦.

111x111=12321 2021-1-3 03:42 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]鍾角力使[/i] 於 2021-1-3 02:36 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529808561&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
如標題是 xxxx, 我向人已就該標題內容, 發表意見, 咁寫 ok ?
I expressed my opinion for the above captioned subject. [/quote]
你呢句一般人一睇就飛, 無所謂...... 你句可以, 不過"英語討論"你問到, 便準確些少.
人有好多種, 用唔用開場白, 你自己決定,

網友提出的"business letter"、唔係自己公司, 尤其注意.
對提出unsolicited opinion, 更加需要這開場白, 否則是唐突.

觀察過公司文化、對方習慣, 再決定係咪省去.

鍾角力使 2021-1-3 05:19 PM

Ok, 只是普通 email 往來, 文法唔錯就可以, 唔駛太執著。I expressed my opinion 用 on, 比 for 好。
另外, shared my idea/ experience 或 gave my advices 都適用於 the above captioned suject ?
如適用, preposition 跟咩?

貓魔人 2021-1-3 10:59 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]鍾角力使[/i] 於 2021-1-3 02:36 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529808561&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
如標題是 xxxx, 我向人已就該標題內容, 發表意見, 咁寫 ok ?
I expressed my opinion for the above captioned subject. [/quote]
你意思係咁?
"Pursuant to the opinions I expressed on the above captioned subject, ..."

corwin 2021-1-4 12:07 AM

[quote]原帖由 [i]鍾角力使[/i] 於 2021-1-3 02:36 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529808561&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
如標題是 xxxx, 我向人已就該標題內容, 發表意見, 咁寫 ok ?
I expressed my opinion for the above captioned subject. [/quote]
Are you trying to say you have made your point before and you have more to add?

111x111=12321 2021-1-4 12:43 AM

[quote]原帖由 [i]鍾角力使[/i] 於 2021-1-3 05:19 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529814988&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
Ok, 只是普通 email 往來, 文法唔錯就可以, 唔駛太執著。I expressed my opinion 用 on, 比 for 好。
另外, shared my idea/ experience 或 gave my advices 都適用於 the above captioned suject ?
如適用, preposition 跟咩? [/quote]
這是官僚話, 最好唔好改, 否則三不像.
大概如下就升算..
With reference to the above captioned subject...
Regarding the captioned subject...
As regards to the..

輪大碩士仔 2021-1-4 12:25 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]111x111=12321[/i] 於 2021-1-4 12:43 AM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529834088&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

這是官僚話, 最好唔好改, 否則三不像.
大概如下就升算..
With reference to the above captioned subject...
Regarding the captioned subject...
As regards to the.. [/quote]
未見過人咁寫email, 已經有heading, 不用重覆

只會refer to previous emails/letters:smile_34::smile_34::smile_34:

[[i] 本帖最後由 輪大碩士仔 於 2021-1-4 12:30 PM 編輯 [/i]]

111x111=12321 2021-1-4 12:35 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]輪大碩士仔[/i] 於 2021-1-4 12:25 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529848563&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

未見過人咁寫email, 已經有heading, 不用重覆

只會refer to previous emails/letters:smile_34::smile_34::smile_34: [/quote]
唔閉目, 其實是見到的. :loveliness:

何必不相信google呢~

輪大碩士仔 2021-1-4 12:37 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]111x111=12321[/i] 於 2021-1-4 12:35 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529848932&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

唔閉目, 其實是見到的. :loveliness:

何必不相信google呢~ [/quote]
冇話你錯,我未見過有人咁寫啫,可能至啱你呢;P;P;P

不過你睇下你地律師行有冇律師會咁寫,有的話不妨鋪出來大家學下野:smile_30::smile_30::smile_30:

[[i] 本帖最後由 輪大碩士仔 於 2021-1-4 12:38 PM 編輯 [/i]]

111x111=12321 2021-1-4 12:38 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]111x111=12321[/i] 於 2021-1-4 12:43 AM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529834088&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

這是官僚話, 最好唔好改, 否則三不像.
大概如下就升算..
With reference to the above captioned subject...
Regarding the captioned subject...
As regards to the.. [/quote]
竟然有兩個人(?)同意寫  I shared my idea/ experience 或 gave my advices (on).. the above captioned subject ?  :funk::funk:

:smile_o16:

111x111=12321 2021-1-4 12:39 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]輪大碩士仔[/i] 於 2021-1-4 12:37 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529848984&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

冇話你錯,我未見過有人咁寫啫,可能至啱你呢;P;P;P

不過你睇下你地律師行有冇律師會咁寫,有的話不妨鋪出來大家學下野:smile_30::smile_30::smile_30: [/quote]
Goo左先講啦. :smile_15:

你講既野, 我都唔明既. :smile_14::lol

輪大碩士仔 2021-1-4 12:41 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]111x111=12321[/i] 於 2021-1-4 12:39 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529849062&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

Goo左先講啦. :smile_15:

你講既野, 我都唔明既. :smile_14::lol [/quote]
不用,我要睇實際有冇人咁做

111x111=12321 2021-1-4 12:42 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]輪大碩士仔[/i] 於 2021-1-4 12:41 PM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529849119&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

不用,我要睇實際有冇人咁做 [/quote]
Google好實際架. :P

閉眼睇, 唔好太有信心啊~

sailorbb 2021-1-4 01:03 PM

[quote]原帖由 [i]corwin[/i] 於 2021-1-4 12:07 AM 發表 [url=https://www.discuss.com.hk/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=529832777&ptid=29638664][img]https://www.discuss.com.hk/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]

Are you trying to say you have made your point before and you have more to add? [/quote]
more like the #captioned_subject went booboo and someone's gonna take the blame. so one must draw a line and say, "hey, i've already told him, not that i am taking your payroll for nothing as a supervisor"
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