edwardlopofung 2023-10-2 15:25
我寫了112首拙劣的詩作,想同大家分享一下。期望有詩壇的高人指點一下,因為我是初學者,我缺乏很多詩學上的知識。
5. 詠手機
一機在手萬里連,
功能齊全萬事通。
人人擁有人人愛,
正是生活好幫手。
英譯:
A mobile phone in your hand can connect thousands of miles. It has complete functions and can do everything. Everyone has it and loves it. It is a good helper in life.
6. 詠仙人掌
年年月月艷陽曬,
凌炎冒熱頑強生,
不是海樓不是夢,
恰似仙人在凡間。
英譯:
It has been scorched by the sun year after year, braving the hot weather to survive, it is not a mirage or a dream, it is just like an immortal in the mortal world.
7. 國慶夜
香江十月國慶夜,
維港景色映眼簾。
煙花璀璨多姿采,
萬眾歡騰樂逍遙。
英譯:
National Day night in October in Hong Kong,
The view of Victoria Harbor catches the eye
The fireworks are bright and colorful,
Everyone is happy and free.
8. 颱風襲港
颱風捲起千層浪,
暴雨濕透路人衣,
巨樹塌下馬路邊,
途人哀號感動天。
英譯:
The typhoon stirred up thousands of waves, Heavy rain soaked passersby clothes, A huge tree fell down on the roadside, The wailing of passers-by moved heaven.
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